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Matt "The Wild Duck Journal #2"

I think you should add that imagery plays a big part in that theme. "depths of the water" and what you mentioned. Maybe even describe the Flying Dutchman and how he could be symbolic of something.

Omar "The Wild Duck: Journal 6"

Thats deep. Good job. You should ellaborate more on the affair and the lies though.

Anthony N. "Wild Duck Journal #2"

I thought it was cool how you talked about the differences between books and plays. That could be an essay topic. You would have to have a book example though. So you could contrast the boring and exciting parts. Please explain more about the way the author took the boring parts out of the play